Joey-Kazaam's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hitomi - Girlchan Contest]

WOW YOUR SO TALENTED

I LOVE HOW YOU DREW A GENERIC BIG EYED ANIME WHORE BESIDE THE GUY FROM EGORAPTOR'S ANIMATION! YOU'RE REALLY GOOD AT DRAWING!
I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE YOUR NEXT GENERIC SPRITE ANIMATION!
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?
Brilliant comeback there, kid. Are you going to go cry to your mommy now?

[Fake Teenick Advertisement]

The humor is there, but the art is lacking

It's funny how that is basically what most of their ads are of,
but the art leaves something to be desired, now I'm sure you've seen some of my animations and how I'm no artistic genius so I hope you aren't disheartened by my hyporcitical judgement,
but some of the text is difficult to read (specifically the text under the guy) and the drawing just seems messy, not because his body is out of proportion but because the smoothing is so awkward, I suggest in flash you lower the smoothing a tad, or raise it.... whichever you prefer, and what suits your art style.

im sure i overanalyzed this lol but u asked for a review so..... here it is lolz

peace out home dawg.

ChandlerThompson responds:

Thanks for the review man. I really don't know why it matters what status you are on this site, constructive criticism is constructive criticism, haha.

Anyway, the body does need some work, I could never draw people very well. I had the idea floating in my head, but just the Teenick logo plus text would be plain. The text being difficult to read is understandable as well. I didn't have much room, but it is in an unpleasant location and is hard to read.

Anyway, thanks for the tips bro, they are always appreciated. See you later!

[Spidey and Venom]

Holy smokes

I really love the style you used to draw these characters. It looks almost like Spiderman has attributes from the Spectatcular and Amazing series.

And Venom looks awesome as he always does (except in the 3rd movie!)

[2 is for tuba]

BAMAN! PIDERMAN!

I love the series, and you did a very good job drawing the characters in a new way